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Only 1 Mistake

“Only 1 Mistake!”



I use to walk with my head high,

I always kept myself on point since I were a young boy,

I was loved by my peers, an Up lift For my talented God given gifts..

People always Cherished my every action,

because I never lost and even when I did it was hard fought..

So they cheer me continuously Believing in my every move and even on the streets I get respect..

I take it that I’m real and people friendly I guess..

Non the less I’m far from perfect, because now people don’t praise like before,

I’m constantly on the wrong side of the score..

and it seems the dude that use to have all the girls isn’t big timing no more..

Now comes the big questions like..

how? And Why?

Well.. my reply…

You get attacked more when you try,

But through the smoke I will rise.

Just like the sun at the break of day..

Yet I got off focus and noticed that 1 mistake is all it take…

Only 1 Mistake.. Lose a life time of hard work…



A: Poetic Thought By: Marvel



“Only 1 Mistake” Is A Poetic Thought by: Marvel Saffold © Copyright Marlevous Thoughts 2014, All Rights Reserved.


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I'm Marvel Saffold, I'm a Witblogger out of Riviera Beach, FL. I'm also a Rapper, many years ago I wasn't aware of the power of literature. Specially my literature, until I started exploiting writing in different format--from music to poetry. Having made that transition--I even surprised myself many of times. The real kicker is I tasted the power prior--in the 9th Grade. I will forever love Ms. Saunders, my English Teacher at William T. Dwyer; because it was then, in her Class that I started mastering writing literature. Years later I'm finally realizing how much of an influence Her Class had in my writing process even in music. I found myself using all that I've learned from Ms. Saunders. I love writing no matter what it is.

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